tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post3209117706653363144..comments2023-06-01T04:45:46.682-04:00Comments on Random Writings: NaNo Excerpt – Week FourC R Wardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-15992489366282238682010-11-28T19:27:32.176-05:002010-11-28T19:27:32.176-05:00There. All fixed now. :-)There. All fixed now. :-)C R Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-3516319480591709812010-11-28T19:24:45.144-05:002010-11-28T19:24:45.144-05:00*sigh* You caught me fair and square. I read this ...*sigh* You caught me fair and square. I read this excerpt after I posted it and couldn't find where he was given a drink, even though she accused him of drinking her best liquor, so I added the part about him pouring himself a drink. Now, of course, it jumps right out at me.<br /><br />D'oh!C R Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-49441985128412235342010-11-27T23:14:32.793-05:002010-11-27T23:14:32.793-05:00uh, not to nit pick, but he must drink fast! He po...uh, not to nit pick, but he must drink fast! He poured a drink and sat down, then she poured them both a drink??? Do I sense some editing gone awry? :D<br /><br />Can't wait to read the whole thing!graceunderpressurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03497067608259260039noreply@blogger.com