tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post2458899778549751563..comments2023-06-01T04:45:46.682-04:00Comments on Random Writings: BLOGFEST!C R Wardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-88963596762050556562010-05-21T10:38:34.369-04:002010-05-21T10:38:34.369-04:00Ahhhh, this was so much fun! I'm so into this ...Ahhhh, this was so much fun! I'm so into this premise of recurring sexy dreams with different men. Your dialogue is hilarious and smooth, too. I hope you post more from this WIP. :)Jean Michelle Miernikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08971882597502010124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-54928680139221198972010-05-20T16:31:29.674-04:002010-05-20T16:31:29.674-04:00I loved this scene! It makes me want to read the r...I loved this scene! It makes me want to read the rest of the book! I think you did a great job with not overdoing the phonetic accents too! This was a lot of fun to read!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-42038493223832973302010-05-20T10:44:22.923-04:002010-05-20T10:44:22.923-04:00This was so much fun to read! Great concept, and g...This was so much fun to read! Great concept, and grinning dialogue. Who hasn't dreamed of being ravished by a gorgeous pirate that can hold a good conversation, too? :)Margo Berendsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-15813242675208613972010-05-20T00:02:12.257-04:002010-05-20T00:02:12.257-04:00Wow - I'm intrigued. I want to know more about...Wow - I'm intrigued. I want to know more about this mystery man.<br /><br />Love the 'dinna' - perfect piratical touch.<br /><br />'...feel like a ghost?'<br /><br />*snort*roh morgonhttp://www.rohmorgon.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-84815410183837333762010-05-19T18:36:10.710-04:002010-05-19T18:36:10.710-04:00Always remembers - pirates speaks in the present t...Always remembers - pirates speaks in the present tense.Tom Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05979590950587415840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-30381650562061635462010-05-19T17:22:43.107-04:002010-05-19T17:22:43.107-04:00Oooh, nice scene. Terrific dialogue. Did he resemb...Oooh, nice scene. Terrific dialogue. Did he resemble Johnny Depp ;)Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-70575276260184749592010-05-19T07:01:56.702-04:002010-05-19T07:01:56.702-04:00Argh, matey! That was low! Black Bart was hawt! Th...Argh, matey! That was low! Black Bart was hawt! The dialogue was perfect. Loved how she kept getting distracted by his obvious goal:)Tina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-77036902084582977442010-05-19T04:54:28.617-04:002010-05-19T04:54:28.617-04:00Nice blend of modern dialogue vs pirate's acce...Nice blend of modern dialogue vs pirate's accent ! Love to know what happens next !Ju Dimellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05898589783338403889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-26161934344496316952010-05-19T00:29:57.486-04:002010-05-19T00:29:57.486-04:00Nicely done. I love the pirate's voice and Ann...Nicely done. I love the pirate's voice and Annelisa's too.Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01445455787485222068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-47704043977398523482010-05-18T20:52:23.003-04:002010-05-18T20:52:23.003-04:00I love this scene, very funny and excellent dialog...I love this scene, very funny and excellent dialogue. This sounds like a great concept for a novel, too. You did his accent very well.Susan Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-48221617453174651312010-05-18T19:50:10.183-04:002010-05-18T19:50:10.183-04:00A pushy pirate lusting for a lady? Interesting cho...A pushy pirate lusting for a lady? Interesting choice, and funny too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-45580441441871484112010-05-18T19:44:57.866-04:002010-05-18T19:44:57.866-04:00Ha! I'm rolling here. I loved this dialogue an...Ha! I'm rolling here. I loved this dialogue and pictured him so clearly. Very lively scene with lusty undertones (would ye be thinking I feel like a ghost?) and tons of humor. I like the way she tries to keep up the introspection, too. Wonderful.Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-79943551307972915112010-05-18T13:27:04.999-04:002010-05-18T13:27:04.999-04:00Clever concept -- it reminded me a little of Alexa...Clever concept -- it reminded me a little of Alexandra and her MC in Nims Island. The dialog was fun, although I stumbled over "dinna" (my bad, though!)<br /><br />Best of luck with this project!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-49362944503379751152010-05-18T12:14:48.702-04:002010-05-18T12:14:48.702-04:00This was really good, and a fun concept (I'm c...This was really good, and a fun concept (I'm curious to see what her other dreams are like... ;)Kristenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13726586763569629811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-166003084401225376.post-77394106720568617372010-05-18T11:39:09.061-04:002010-05-18T11:39:09.061-04:00This was a lot of fun, even though I normally winc...This was a lot of fun, even though I normally wince the moment anyone writes dialogue with the accent in place. I liked it a lot.stuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16388674850920848503noreply@blogger.com